training for momoci

the door opens and evreyoneis dead and a rouge ninja is inside and says ahh zabuza come with me and we will be unstopabel and missing ninja destroy the leaf hahahaha

screamo says"dag kool good job i would have helped all u had to was call" screamo sat back down and said "o well"

i think about it debating if i should attack or not

but bein a missing ninja suits me more so i follow ready to defend incase i get betrayed

i ask "where are we going"

screamo whispers to zabuza"ill follow just in case"screamo stood back up

the ninja said come on to the mist training grounds

ok ....i dissapear

i follow

him and the ninja appear at the mist training ground and there 16 other rouge ninja there and all ask the one the brougt you there ok is it time for the battle royal.

i wind up in the mist training grounds

i look around at the 16 other ninjas wondering if il survive

i throw all of my senbon at 5 different ninjas


whilst running in the grounds
P - 70

evades - 1
4 - shuriken
0 - senbon
2 - kunai



10 damadge

they all chatch it and they say I did not say go and we wont kill you ok
now GO

i jump staright into the air and throw 2 shuriken at two of the ninja

and prepare for my most powerfull jutsu

hP - 70

evades - 1
2 - shuriken
0 - senbon
2 - kunai



10 damadge

when you throw the kuni a ninja jumps up and says soul grasp

i push my self away and throw my last two kunai at him

startled i begin to fall

hP - 70

evades -0
2 - shuriken
0 - senbon
0 - kunai



10 damadge

the kuni comes and pirecis his armor and then he said a not done then a nother person cuts of his heaf and says not the rules then evrey one else starts to battle and one of the leader comes over to you and takes him away saying come we have to go

i follow this leader person still confuzed as to why i was there

i stay behind him not letting my guard down

Some problems with this.

Momochi your great, but....

You don't post all of the stats you should in a battle(Theres a new system read it, its called Kugo's system and its under Rules and Announcements)

Ryuku, try using Quotation Marks, reading your posts is WAY too confusing. Also, work on your grammar, it is terrible. Mine isn't perfect, but at least I check mine, and people can understand what I say.

Work on these please.

(yes i shall thanks for the tips

i dont mind being corrected if its like that just hate it when peeps will be like

"idoit uve missed this n that ")

the ninja lahgfs and says elffer sight jutsu

ok i shall withdraw from this trainin as i do need more practise

but again im surely deserve a small stat rise lol

for doing most of it

Tell you what. Complete my training, and you get your stat rise.

ok then ive started a new thread in the village hiddin in the mist meet me there and we can train